This e-portfolio is going to share my learning with others.
Very good Ben how bout trying for neatness as well as speed!
That was mum.
Some of your sentences are highly descriptive eg " it was like world war 3". Remember good writers constantly make changes to their writing. This is your draft writing back so there should be more evidence of making changes.Mr Ladbrook
Very good Ben how bout trying for neatness as well as speed!
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ReplyDeleteSome of your sentences are highly descriptive eg " it was like world war 3". Remember good writers constantly make changes to their writing. This is your draft writing back so there should be more evidence of making changes.
ReplyDeleteMr Ladbrook